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Date written: 01/01/2025

Dawn's Arrival


with curtains drawn i bathe in dawn's sunlight,

r e l i n q u i s h i n g yesterday

with an audible yawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Woods Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Something we've all done, we can see it in our minds eye, yet you craft a thought that will forever enter the readers mind when they do this again...relinquish yesterday. Awesome! Xo
Ibeh Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Crystol:-)
Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 7:42 PM
Y-a-w-n. I love it! Are you positive that 'yesterday is totally relinquished?! HNY, gw
Ibeh Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 5:33 AM
Thanks for the visit, Gershon:-) Same to you, my friend.
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