Dawn's Arrival

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Date written: 01/01/2025

with curtains drawn i bathe in dawn's sunlight, r e l i n q u i s h i n g yesterday with an audible yawn.

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Crystol Woods

Date: 1/6/2025 11:18:00 AM

Something we've all done, we can see it in our minds eye, yet you craft a thought that will forever enter the readers mind when they do this again...relinquish yesterday. Awesome! Xo

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/6/2025 4:17:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Crystol:-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/1/2025 7:42:00 PM

Y-a-w-n. I love it! Are you positive that 'yesterday is totally relinquished?! HNY, gw

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/2/2025 5:33:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Gershon:-) Same to you, my friend.