Dawning On Me Slightly

Dawning on me slightly
is a twilight whose pinks are breathless
Leaning on me in a nurturing way

Dancing toward me now
is a forest faerie who seems rather restless
Preening with a satisfied grin

Dreaming in my rem state
I am in awe, amused and besotted
Loving the heaven of my imagination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Had to Fav this one, beautiful, magical.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:34 PM
My imagination brought this one to me.
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Simply stated -- a FAVE for me. Lovely, Caren! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Thank you GW. I am glad you liked her.
Foster Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Lovely. The twilight of yesterday, today and tomorrow at the edges of our now. Beautifully written as always. Dance on my friend. EVer I love to read your work. Ann
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Thank you Ann. I am enjoying your book!
Fields Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 5:32 AM
the poem, seems so cute and loving - it has a childlike Essence, that draws you in = like tiptoeing through someone's wondrous dreams
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Thank you Verlecia. I appreciate your visit.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 12:04 AM
Spoken like a poet Caren. What would we do without imagination! xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 9:59 PM
I count on her daily Connie!
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