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Dawning Light

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I was inspired to write this as I witnessed the miracle of sunrise! I chose to write in Tanaga form,(although it is not offered in the selection option) capturing the beauty of the fleeting moment, when dawn turns into day.

Smokey streaks of dawning light, Whisking lonesome clouds in flight, Heralding the suns all might, Day emerges with delight! Submitted on :Oct. 18, 2021 For: Bite Size Poem No23 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2021 11:41:00 AM

beautiful in every sense of the word, many congrats Paulette:-) hugs Jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/1/2021 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Jan, glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Constance La France

Date: 10/23/2021 6:10:00 AM

Pauletter, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in Line's contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/1/2021 11:24:00 AM

Hi Constance, Thank you for your kind comments. Blessings, Paulette

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/23/2021 3:42:00 AM

This is lovely, Paulette! Congratulations! ...Fran

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/1/2021 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Fran, glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/22/2021 8:04:00 PM

Dear Paulette, your inspired pen captures the magic moment when dawn turns to day so vividly. Just beautiful! Congratulations for your excellent win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/1/2021 11:26:00 AM

Hi Susan, your comments are so uplifting; I am glad that I was able to paint the beauty of dawn. Blessings, Paulette

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/22/2021 10:20:00 AM

Paulette, this truly mirrors the delight of a brilliant sunrise with wonderful word use - "smoky streaks," "whisking." Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/1/2021 11:28:00 AM

Hi Sam, So glad you enjoyed the imagery ...Thank you for your kind words. Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/22/2021 8:45:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on this win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed autumn day..................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/22/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Paula, you are always so supportive! Blessings, Paulette

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/22/2021 3:05:00 AM

Beautiful, Paulette, the Creator's works are always delightful:) congratulations:)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/22/2021 8:52:00 AM

Hi Jo, Indeed, our Creator's work is perfection! Blessings, Paulette

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/21/2021 11:50:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for this, making me delight in the light of the Lord. God bless you.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/22/2021 8:55:00 AM

Hi Beata, I am happy to know you find delight in my poem~truly inspired by God. Blessings, Paulette

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/21/2021 11:08:00 PM

Indeed, is great poetic work with a vivid illustration of the dawning light! Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/22/2021 8:56:00 AM

Christuraj, Thank you! Morning is most spectacular, it inspires me to write. Blessings, Paulette

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 10/8/2021 9:42:00 PM

In your dawning light you captured a picture perfect new day evolving. A pleasure to read. Cheers Anne :-)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/17/2021 9:08:00 AM

Hi Anne, thank you stopping by my page and finding pleasure in Dawning Light. Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2021 7:37:00 AM

"Beautiful" I am enjoying reading your many writes. I fell for this one. Have a blessed day as you write away................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/26/2021 9:23:00 AM

Hi Paula, thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment on my work. I love the beauty in nature, as you can see, it's what inspires me to write.