Dawnbreak

shadows creep along
gray fog ribbons undulate

dying dark bleeds light

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oceanword playhaiku

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Karen Jones

December 9, 2024 at 2:06 PM

Beautiful such lovely imagery!

Arlo Parker

December 9, 2024 at 11:05 PM

Sunrise moments always food for thought...thx, Karen. :o))

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 5, 2024 at 3:36 PM

oh master of haiku, it's seldom i see a sunrise as i'm often going to sleep just before the sun rises ;)

Arlo Parker

December 5, 2024 at 8:09 PM

Then note those moonset auras, CP, and launch into peasant dreams. Always. ;o))

Crystol Woods

November 21, 2024 at 11:30 AM

"Dying dark"... that force of evil extinguished by..."Bleeds light"... the Light of God and goodness! Awesome!!!! Xo

Arlo Parker

November 21, 2024 at 4:25 PM

Ain't it great God moves over earth and sees us everyday?. U r a blessing to your Congregation, CW. I'll bet they crave your poetic sermons and illumination of Our Lord. :o))

Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 21, 2024 at 5:42 AM

Dear Arlo, Your haiku is a stunning miniature landscape of transition. In just three lines, you've captured the ethereal moment between night and day, where shadows dance and light emerges. The delicate imagery of "gray fog ribbons" is particularly evocative. Beautifully crafted! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Arlo Parker

November 21, 2024 at 4:22 PM

Miss Crystol, you're not lacking in that department. C'mon humble beauty! :o))

Arlo Parker

November 21, 2024 at 4:21 PM

OML!! Thanks for your ebullient comment, Daniel. Your visit always appreciated. :o)

Crystol Woods

November 21, 2024 at 11:31 AM

Wow I wish I could express myself half so eloquently! Xo