Dawnbreak

shadows creep along gray fog ribbons undulate dying dark bleeds light ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Karen Jones

Date: 12/9/2024 2:06:00 PM

Beautiful such lovely imagery!

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/9/2024 11:05:00 PM

Sunrise moments always food for thought...thx, Karen. :o))

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/5/2024 3:36:00 PM

oh master of haiku, it's seldom i see a sunrise as i'm often going to sleep just before the sun rises ;)

Arlo Parker
Date: 12/5/2024 8:09:00 PM

Then note those moonset auras, CP, and launch into peasant dreams. Always. ;o))

Crystol Woods

Date: 11/21/2024 11:30:00 AM

"Dying dark"... that force of evil extinguished by..."Bleeds light"... the Light of God and goodness! Awesome!!!! Xo

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/21/2024 4:25:00 PM

Ain't it great God moves over earth and sees us everyday?. U r a blessing to your Congregation, CW. I'll bet they crave your poetic sermons and illumination of Our Lord. :o))

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/21/2024 5:42:00 AM

Dear Arlo, Your haiku is a stunning miniature landscape of transition. In just three lines, you've captured the ethereal moment between night and day, where shadows dance and light emerges. The delicate imagery of "gray fog ribbons" is particularly evocative. Beautifully crafted! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/21/2024 4:22:00 PM

Miss Crystol, you're not lacking in that department. C'mon humble beauty! :o))

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/21/2024 4:21:00 PM

OML!! Thanks for your ebullient comment, Daniel. Your visit always appreciated. :o)

Crystol Woods
Date: 11/21/2024 11:31:00 AM

Wow I wish I could express myself half so eloquently! Xo

Tom Woody

Date: 11/20/2024 5:56:00 AM

I have no idea what this means but it reads deliciously

Tom Woody
Date: 11/20/2024 10:16:00 AM

Ahhh I see it now

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/20/2024 10:04:00 AM

Morning, sunrise, beginning of the day, gonna be sunshine overcoming night, evil defeated....c'mon!!!