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Dawn To Day

When every morning, dawn turns to day, what would be my wish? for you to stay When every sunset, it’s always an ending the last hue of the horizon, the velvet’s beginning When every night It’s just the stars what would be my wish? to heal all my scars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/25/2024 12:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/2/2018 7:32:00 AM
I hope your scars are healed Arkalos... Great first post, welcome to poetry soup.
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Arkalos Solakra
Date: 1/4/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thank You <3
Date: 1/1/2018 2:56:00 PM
- A lovely first poem, Arkalos :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup - Best wishes for a happy new year - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you :)

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