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Dawn Symphony

I wake up to a growing golden dawn Birds chirping songs like symphonies adorning The sweet scent of natures verdancy in green Flowers opening rainbow blooms of radiancy I see from my window the rays of light dappling my face Through the curtains that shimmer in a wave From a gentle breeze And as I pull back the curtains I can view The nimbus clouds as the slowly move Floating across a pale blue sky And the thought of nature dances all across my sight Insects flittering here and there from bloom to bloom I love the dawn and all its golden incandescence The crisp dawn feels so effervescent Waking up to this is beautifully pleasant. 17/7/18

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Date: 7/25/2018 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations. Your dawn poem really describes my favorite time of day. Cheers, SuZ
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/25/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating and for your kind words.
Date: 7/24/2018 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Absolutely beautiful! Well done.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/25/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thank you very much I really appreciate that. Faux
Date: 7/18/2018 8:33:00 AM
Visual, beautiful.. your creativity is Exceptional!
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/18/2018 11:15:00 AM
You are too kind, thanks for reading and appreciating.
Date: 7/17/2018 2:31:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery. Particularly keen on this line: "I love the dawn and all its golden incandescence. The crisp dawn feels so effervescent."
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/17/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading. Faux
Date: 7/17/2018 1:10:00 PM
Hello Fauxcroft Wade, your poem is beautifully done. I can see this scene as I read. Have a nice day my friend.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/17/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating, I am glad you saw the image I tried to paint. Faux
Date: 7/17/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much for sharing this beauty, lovely one !
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Date: 7/17/2018 11:00:00 AM
Beautiful. Sounds very nice Faux :)
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/17/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, you are too kind. Faux

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