Dawn Love Arise

Breathless, underneath the grove and pink heath,
on endless verdure drunk with its glamour.
Her auburn loose spiral curls swirl beneath 
Her shoulders, consumes the fresh scent of her. 

Yet my heart's rhythm quick as her name lingers
embrace on soft brim intermingling hues.
Staggering touches' weft, swirls round my fingers
Spinning the fine thread, I choose not to lose.

Under truss folds of satin and night skies,
idyllic rapture in an endless night
Until twilight hours of dawn love arise,
Awake to her wistful smile, morning light.

Two souls amorous profoundly tender 
Love eagerly unfurls in its splendor.

11/14/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Carber Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Congrats Eve-- a very sensual and quite literally colorful poem!
Chiri Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Eve congrats on your top win!;)
Kauffman Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your win! Beautifully done. Love the line "Love eagerly unfurls its splendor" that really sums up the poem.
Adams Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Wonderfully penned sonnet Eve both beautiful and romantic ... well done congratulations on your top win :) hugs
Dutta Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Congrats Eve to win on this wonderful poem. Love
Scars Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:58 PM
o, eve, your beauty shines...congrats x:-)-luloo
Hamilton Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Beautiful sonnet, congrats Eve on a nice third place win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 9:21 AM
A lovely romantic sonnet that should do very well in the contest Eve. Have a great week! : ) xxoo
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:23 AM
a sonnet of tender passion - a song that unfurls every moment with its avian splendor. Love Eve.-RAJAT
Proxenos Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Wow Eve, this passionate poem is truly destined for a win! You do write so beautifully my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:20 AM
I don't know about Melani but I fell in love with this. Beautifully done Eve. Also, while I am here, the painting I saw on your POTD was amazing, I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it.You are very talented my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:24 AM
I have easily "fallen in love with this sonnet", Eve.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:04 AM
Romance... lovely. Blessings, Gina
Na Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:05 AM
A wonderful addicting poem. Very Romantic. Thanks for sharing this Eve. Now you got me wanting to write one :) thanks
Somadas Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 3:41 AM
##Two souls amorous profoundly tender Love eagerly unfurls in its splendor.## Wow.. Beautiful lines...
Poetry Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 2:03 AM
Romantic pleasures in an endless night- that right there is what all in love want...I know i do with my lady
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