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Dawn Is More Than What It Seems

Dawn is more than what it seems Take my hand, I’ll lead the way through oatmeal frosted cookie fields The two of us will run and play enjoying all this morning yields Candy coated pebble lanes lined with chocolate butter creams Fence line melted sugar cane here among our sunrise dreams So much love I have for you as we stroll this paradise Whipped cream sea foam morning dew, maple glazed, a perfect slice Hold me close as now we lay beneath vanilla pudding skies Kiss me once more on this day as I gaze into your eyes Meadowlarks in flight they sing, melodies we love to hear Lemon drop horizons bring all we see so crystal clear Marshmallows and jelly beans, peppermints from up above Dawn is more than what it seems when it’s shared with one you love Good morning Soupers

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Maria Williams

Date: 4/27/2017 3:13:00 AM

Oh Chris – a master wordsmith of sensuality – Do I detect the ‘throes of sweet sensuality in verse 3 and 4? Even he thought of all those tempting sweets will give me a weight problem – which touch wood I don’t have. But your clever dentist has probably clocked up a few patients by now!!

Chris Green
Date: 4/27/2017 8:37:00 AM

Hmmm, I guess it could be, but I never kiss and tell. :) Thank you Maria. I am happy you enjoyed this one and FYI...this poem is calorie free. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2017 6:13:00 PM

Delicious!

Chris Green
Date: 4/26/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/25/2017 2:26:00 PM

Top of the Afternoon Chris. All I can say is pass the jelly beans please. And yes the red black or pink ones (lol). Chris allow me to say always do you take us your readers by the hand. Honestly. Lovely in every poetic way. Have a wonderful afternoon.

Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so very much Lisa. I have friend who is a dentist and he asked me to write this in hopes of drumming up some more business. :) Just kidding. I appreciate your kindness always my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/25/2017 8:57:00 AM

Now this is Sweet Chris! Such a fun poem :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I am happy you stopped by this morning

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/25/2017 8:33:00 AM

Now I'm hungry!!

Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 8:35:00 AM

I was hungry when I wrote it, in case you couldn't tell. :) Thanks so much Elizabeth

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/25/2017 7:18:00 AM

Have mercy my friend, Chris, for I am on a strict diet and have lost more than 15 pounds in two months! Reading your excellent poem I got back half of it! Haha! Much enjoyed my friend!

Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 8:24:00 AM

Sorry about that my friend. This poem is strictly calorie free though, so no worries. :) Thanks so much.