Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Dawn Is More Than What It Seems

Dawn is more than what it seems

Take my hand, I’ll lead the way
through oatmeal frosted cookie fields
The two of us will run and play
enjoying all this morning yields

Candy coated pebble lanes
lined with chocolate butter creams
Fence line melted sugar cane
here among our sunrise dreams

So much love I have for you
as we stroll this paradise
Whipped cream sea foam morning dew,
maple glazed, a perfect slice

Hold me close as now we lay
beneath vanilla pudding skies
Kiss me once more on this day
as I gaze into your eyes

Meadowlarks in flight they sing,
melodies we love to hear
Lemon drop horizons bring
all we see so crystal clear

Marshmallows and jelly beans,
peppermints from up above
Dawn is more than what it seems
when it’s shared with one you love 

Good morning Soupers

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Maria Williams April 27, 2017 at 3:13 AM Oh Chris – a master wordsmith of sensuality – Do I detect the ‘throes of sweet sensuality in verse 3 and 4? Even he thought of all those tempting sweets will give me a weight problem – which touch wood I don’t have. But your clever dentist has probably clocked up a few patients by now!! Chris Green April 27, 2017 at 8:37 AM Hmmm, I guess it could be, but I never kiss and tell. :) Thank you Maria. I am happy you enjoyed this one and FYI...this poem is calorie free. :)

Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2017 at 6:13 PM Delicious! Chris Green April 26, 2017 at 8:18 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Lisa Ricci April 25, 2017 at 2:26 PM Top of the Afternoon Chris. All I can say is pass the jelly beans please. And yes the red black or pink ones (lol). Chris allow me to say always do you take us your readers by the hand. Honestly. Lovely in every poetic way. Have a wonderful afternoon. Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 2:36 PM Thank you so very much Lisa. I have friend who is a dentist and he asked me to write this in hopes of drumming up some more business. :) Just kidding. I appreciate your kindness always my friend.

Heidi Sands April 25, 2017 at 8:57 AM Now this is Sweet Chris! Such a fun poem :) Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 9:16 AM Thank you Heidi. I am happy you stopped by this morning

Elizabeth Kinch April 25, 2017 at 8:33 AM Now I'm hungry!! Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:35 AM I was hungry when I wrote it, in case you couldn't tell. :) Thanks so much Elizabeth

Demetrios Trifiatis April 25, 2017 at 7:18 AM Have mercy my friend, Chris, for I am on a strict diet and have lost more than 15 pounds in two months! Reading your excellent poem I got back half of it! Haha! Much enjoyed my friend! Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:24 AM Sorry about that my friend. This poem is strictly calorie free though, so no worries. :) Thanks so much.

Agnes Krampe April 25, 2017 at 7:16 AM Good morning, Chris - that is a very SWEET poem :) Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:23 AM Thank you so much Agnes. I am happy you liked it

Darren White April 25, 2017 at 7:12 AM I would like some marshmallows and jelly beans please. And although we're just friends, come share them with me :) Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:23 AM No problem, I have plenty my friend. Thanks so much Darren.

Tim Smith April 25, 2017 at 6:38 AM I must brush my teeth after all those sweets...good day Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:17 AM Good idea. :) Thanks so much Tim...good day.

Charmaine Chircop April 25, 2017 at 6:15 AM Definitely a sweet tooth morning...A yummy delicious one in all means :)..Good Morning Mr.Green. Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:16 AM Good morning my SWEET friend. :) Thanks so very much Charmaine.

White Wolf April 25, 2017 at 6:10 AM Deliciously beautiful, Chris! The form could be quatrain also I believe! Have a great day mate! Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 8:16 AM Thank you Rick. I appreciate you saying so and your kindness.