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Dawn In W A

Lonely Blue Ocean
breaks the abiding gold sands....
surf and turf mingle
under clear undaunted skies---
blue moon fades to sunlit gold.

© Harry J Horsman  2011

tanka

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James Fraser

Date: 4/12/2011 11:23:00 AM

Many congratulation's Harry on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

Date: 3/23/2011 8:21:00 PM

Great to see you at the top Harry with your # 4 with blue.. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in fourth place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/23/2011 1:42:00 PM

surf and turf! I used to love that meal! No more red meat for me! Wonderful winning write! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 8:47:00 AM

What a sight this must be to behold, Rick. Sounds beautiful. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/23/2011 6:19:00 AM

Wonderful dawn here harry!Congrats on your win---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 4:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Harry in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 10:21:00 PM

Hey, at first I thought this might be about WAshington state, where my dad lives. It is on the pacific ocean on our west coast! This is lovely. Congratualations on your win, Harry.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/22/2011 8:54:00 PM

Harry an awesome image thru lovely words. Very warm congrats for this win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2011 6:55:00 PM

Great Tanka from the Down Under. Does the moon and sun appear more gorgeous in W A? Nice win, Harry. Gwendolen

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/22/2011 4:27:00 PM

beautiful tanka Harry, congrats on your win in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 12:27:00 PM

Congrats Harry on your super win in the blue and gold contest luv.. an awesome write with words depicting the colors so well luv.. enjo another great victory my friend..

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/22/2011 10:55:00 AM

How lovely Australia sounds to me on this rainy day!! Lovely poem, Harry !! Congratulations on your win!

Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2011 10:40:00 AM

Many congrats on your win : ) Jack

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:16:00 AM

I can only imagine how very beautiful W Australia is from this image-filled gem you have written, Harry! Congratulations on your awesome 4th Place Win in Rick's Contest. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:16:00 AM

Good work that is very descriptive..Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/14/2011 11:53:00 AM

beautiful description, Harry! Best of luck in the contest:) Thanks so much for your comments, Harry! Of course you could not know when you wrote about me painting that scene, that I do actually paint;) Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 4:45:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this eve...Good luck in the contest..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 7:09:00 AM

Spectacular portrait in words Harry my friend.. much success in Rick's contest with this vibrant vision ..luv..

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/8/2011 7:24:00 AM

A cacophony of natural shades shrouding the beach bums! Enjoyed your scintillating beachscape!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2011 1:08:00 AM

yes to this breathtaking visuals, harry... i like the third line for climactic touch.. win, win..:) huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/8/2011 12:31:00 AM

Loved that last line, harry-- this creates such a serene picture for me-- way to go for you :) I hope this scores high :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 12:13:00 AM

I can't believe all the good poems this theme is bringing out in people. I am so glad not to be juding THIS one. Good luck with it, harry. And yours is just great.

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