Dawn Awakens

Dawn awakens me with pursed lips replicating yours still dancing in my dream sunlight drapes my shoulders as I envision you with that silky smile hair cascading to and fro in a look I long to know I see pretty and eyes to behold cheeks soft and sweet and lips to bestow and I feel you I feel beauty radiance reflecting your soul it adorns me and warms me rocks me gently as winds lightly blow it's kindness and kisses giving the world a hello it's sunshine through rainstorms fires burning deep down below desire in holding your heart is aglow
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Manassian Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 1:41 AM
This is a brilliant write, Tim. So full of longing. You've been absent for some time. Any hope of you coming back?
Croft Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 4:19 AM
An amazing image of Dawn's awakening, enjoyed reading this morning.
Manassian Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Beautiful. Absolutely. Hope all is well. I'm going through my older writes and comments. Thought of you.
Chiri Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Love your writing!;)
Chircop Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 8:59 AM
This is so very Romantic! Tim..My cup of tea.
Downing  Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Hi Tim, I hope you’ll come back soon. We miss you!
Murray Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Hi Tim. I am also missing you and thinking of this night that now seems so long ago when you rang me from an Irish pup in ?Boston to count in the new year with your friends, including your mad Irish one. I hope wherever you are tonight you are healthy, happy and hopefully almost drunk again. Best wishes for the new year. Jean.
Tor Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Miss you Tim, God bless you my friend...
Curtis Avatar
January 27, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Timmy where are you, I hope that you have such a brilliant writing career that you don't have time for us amateurs,if otherwise, I hope you and yours are well and prosperous ! God Bless
Thomas Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 3:03 PM
How very beautiful Tim. So warm and loving. Where are you my friend; I hope you're well :)
Downing  Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 4:28 PM
A charming piece to put a smile in the ladies hearts. Beautiful and romantic! I love it :)
Chircop Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 9:09 AM
How lovely and Heartwarming this is.So lovely to see a poem of yours here Tim.
Thompson Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Really enjoy this romantic piece Tim. I hope you are well. Take care my friend. jess
Tor Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Tim where are you? Even I stop by every once in a while. Hope you are well...
Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Long time no see. I hope all is well.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Hello Tim Smith, a beautiful poem about the dawn. Have a nice evening my friend.
poemtheart Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 1:06 AM
very nicely written..!! It is an amazingly awesome poem...:)
Squyres Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 1:54 PM
I love this... simply lovely !! It reaches beyond the outward appearance and sees the depths within another.
Ball Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 1:46 PM
This is lovely Tim. I think I've been away too long. God Bless, JB
Hopper Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Where are you, friend?
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Beautiful, Tim, great impact in your last stanza. Hope all is well.
Melugin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 6:16 AM
The Glowing relationship of soulmates so illuminates as your heart speaks!
Hopper Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Oh man it has been way too long since I have read your poetry! Beautiful!
Roper Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:56 PM
I enjoyed reading poem, dear friend, very well written with great romantic feel. Hugs Eve ~`*
Chircop Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Hello Tim..So wonderful to read your beautiful poetry and sigh.
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