Dawn Awakens

Dawn awakens me with pursed lips replicating yours still dancing in my dream sunlight drapes my shoulders as I envision you with that silky smile hair cascading to and fro in a look I long to know I see pretty and eyes to behold cheeks soft and sweet and lips to bestow and I feel you I feel beauty radiance reflecting your soul it adorns me and warms me rocks me gently as winds lightly blow it's kindness and kisses giving the world a hello it's sunshine through rainstorms fires burning deep down below desire in holding your heart is aglow

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Date: 8/30/2024 4:19:00 AM
An amazing image of Dawn's awakening, enjoyed reading this morning.
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Date: 6/1/2024 5:55:00 AM
Beautiful. Absolutely. Hope all is well. I'm going through my older writes and comments. Thought of you.
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Date: 12/23/2023 1:28:00 PM
Love your writing!;)
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Date: 9/6/2023 8:59:00 AM
This is so very Romantic! Tim..My cup of tea.
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Date: 8/31/2023 6:02:00 PM
Hi Tim, I hope you’ll come back soon. We miss you!
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Date: 12/31/2021 1:32:00 PM
Hi Tim. I am also missing you and thinking of this night that now seems so long ago when you rang me from an Irish pup in ?Boston to count in the new year with your friends, including your mad Irish one. I hope wherever you are tonight you are healthy, happy and hopefully almost drunk again. Best wishes for the new year. Jean.
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Date: 12/28/2021 4:32:00 PM
Miss you Tim, God bless you my friend...
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Date: 1/27/2021 12:38:00 PM
Timmy where are you, I hope that you have such a brilliant writing career that you don't have time for us amateurs,if otherwise, I hope you and yours are well and prosperous ! God Bless
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Date: 12/29/2020 3:03:00 PM
How very beautiful Tim. So warm and loving. Where are you my friend; I hope you're well :)
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Date: 11/9/2020 4:28:00 PM
A charming piece to put a smile in the ladies hearts. Beautiful and romantic! I love it :)
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Date: 11/6/2020 9:09:00 AM
How lovely and Heartwarming this is.So lovely to see a poem of yours here Tim.
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Date: 5/19/2020 4:12:00 PM
Really enjoy this romantic piece Tim. I hope you are well. Take care my friend. jess
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:27:00 PM
Tim where are you? Even I stop by every once in a while. Hope you are well...
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Date: 3/11/2020 9:07:00 AM
Long time no see. I hope all is well.
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Date: 1/27/2020 5:47:00 PM
Hello Tim Smith, a beautiful poem about the dawn. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/2/2020 1:06:00 AM
very nicely written..!! It is an amazingly awesome poem...:)
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Date: 10/2/2019 1:54:00 PM
I love this... simply lovely !! It reaches beyond the outward appearance and sees the depths within another.
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Date: 9/17/2019 1:46:00 PM
This is lovely Tim. I think I've been away too long. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/6/2019 4:05:00 PM
Where are you, friend?
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Date: 4/30/2019 2:12:00 PM
Beautiful, Tim, great impact in your last stanza. Hope all is well.
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Date: 2/7/2019 6:16:00 AM
The Glowing relationship of soulmates so illuminates as your heart speaks!
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Date: 1/26/2019 10:02:00 AM
Oh man it has been way too long since I have read your poetry! Beautiful!
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading poem, dear friend, very well written with great romantic feel. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/11/2019 2:40:00 PM
Hello Tim..So wonderful to read your beautiful poetry and sigh.
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Date: 1/3/2019 2:28:00 AM
Came back for a second read, I Have to say Tim you are a very Talented poet!
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