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Dawn ascends to brighten the day Birds trill with songs of glee Morning's breeze makes the willows sway I rejoice with esprit As Earth keeps on turning I will be discerning The sun will be burning As night wends Dawn ascends September 26, 2021 Quietus-August 2021 Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/4/2021 9:19:00 AM
I have been enjoying reading your poems. You have a very subtle way of bringing home the theme. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/4/2021 7:38:00 AM
very nicely done Jenna
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Date: 10/3/2021 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jenna, Nicely done
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Date: 9/27/2021 5:20:00 AM
Very nice, Jenna, and the perfect pic to accompany your poem!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/27/2021 6:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. Finding just the right picture is half the fun!
Date: 9/26/2021 10:21:00 PM
So well done, Jenna. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 9/27/2021 6:43:00 AM
I'm pleased that you like this one, Victor, but I'll not put any eggs in my basket.
Date: 9/26/2021 2:40:00 PM
just beautiful Jenna xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/26/2021 2:55:00 PM
Your remarks are so welcome. Thanks, Jan.
Date: 9/26/2021 2:29:00 PM
Stunning! A Fave for me! I see a winner! Such richness in your poetry...as if the words fly off the page as fireworks for our soul. You are a Gifted Poetess! Love Chantelle hugs
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Date: 9/26/2021 2:55:00 PM
I appreciate your encouraging comments, Chantelle. Thanks so very much.