Dawn

The dawn of my life came late in the day
She turned darkness to light for me I can say
Her light burns brighter than the shining sun
Befor we even met I knew she was the one
you see she is the woman I have dreamed of 
you have probably dreamed of her to 
I thank God that I met her 
all my dreams have come true
her name Is Dawn Carole and she makes my heart sing
Her love surrounds me just like saturns great ring
now I am her moon and she is my sun like a solar eclipse
We'll be joined into  one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Fraser Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest James .....:)
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May 17, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Great Job James, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses
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May 17, 2011 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest James. Love, Carol
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May 17, 2011 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, James
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May 16, 2011 at 4:42 PM
Congrats James on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest luv..with this excellent entry... enjoy your very special honor...
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