Dawn

clement moon...loses glow...sun rises

rose greets dawn...reassures...tears dewy

heart of mist...broken by...dawn chorus

rising sun...in shadows...dry stone wall

© Harry J Horsman  2013

naturehaiku

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David Williams

March 7, 2013 at 1:14 PM

Harry belated congrats on your superb win....David

Yanny Widjanarko

March 5, 2013 at 6:04 PM

Congrats on your win Harry, such a beautiful words :) wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, Yanny

Barbara Gorelick

March 5, 2013 at 7:18 AM

Congrats to you..love the progression of this piece. BG

Lori Lucas Mcclure

March 5, 2013 at 5:08 AM

Congratulations on your win with this most ecellent ellip Harry! Lori

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 5, 2013 at 1:45 AM

Congrats on your HM harry my friend well done xx

Debra Squyres

March 4, 2013 at 7:03 PM

Each image brought such different pictures...then collected together in my mind. Great work !! Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

Painted Hunter

March 4, 2013 at 12:38 PM

Well done here, Harry...Excellent Win!

Poet Destroyer A

March 4, 2013 at 10:10 AM

Hello Harry, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

March 4, 2013 at 7:05 AM

Harry congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tahera Mannan

March 3, 2013 at 9:57 PM

Warmest congrats on this super win Harry.

Bl Devnath

February 13, 2013 at 4:03 PM

A great picture adorned with very acute imagination painted with different sweet colors. Excellent poem just read. Thanks for your all the comments, my very sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Connie Marcum Wong

February 11, 2013 at 3:07 AM

All of these were great and meld together well Harry. Loved reading them.

Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2013 at 11:57 PM

yes, seeing it again. I think you might get a very high win with this one. It's nearly midnight and my goal was to be off by then. YIKES.

Sara Kendrick

February 10, 2013 at 2:03 PM

Very creative work..Good to know that they are contest entry..Reads like a winner to me...Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Painted Hunter

February 10, 2013 at 10:54 AM

This is cool, harry...love that last one

Mehnaz Veetil

February 10, 2013 at 3:33 AM

Powerful this is, mind tastes loss and then is greeted by rising sun, ... enjoyed the concept... good luck in the contest...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 10, 2013 at 2:28 AM

Hi you are at it again with your wonderful writes. xx

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2013 at 11:54 PM

wow, Harry, you did like four sets of them to my lowly one!! I am surprised more people are not filling up this ellips contest. It's not so difficult. you did super well with this romantic grouping. I just came on to post my poem and happened to see you had a new post so it was nice to catch you on my way back off tonight. Luv, Andrea