Dawn

As dawn floats calmly in my
bedroom, moving slowly
across the room.  She begins
caressing my nude foot evenly,
waking my strength and 
stiffness to a glorious 
good morning.
Her quiet warmth and light
gently brushes my cheek.
I open my eyes and breath a 
sigh of release,
as her heat
hovers and rises 
above my sheets,
drowning me in tenderness.
My body tingles, then
stirs as birds 
chirp and sing 
on easy trees.
The aroma of coffee
and comfort arouses my 
senses as they fall from a 
breeze through an 
open window.
I long to fool around 
in this moment all morning, 
but life requires me to 
launch my routine.
I stretch for heaven, and yawn,
as dawn floats calmly away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/16/2010 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your honorable Mention in Catie's Fanning the Embers Comp love Jayne sorry for the late congrates
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:06:00 PM
lovely entry, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:06:00 PM
This is reall an excellent job done with your free verse, Mike. Way to Go! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Mike
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:37:00 PM
Congrats Mike on your HM in Catie's contest with this super write and honor to enjoy tonight..with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:57:00 PM
This is lovely writing, Mike! I enjoyed it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:49:00 AM
Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
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Date: 6/27/2010 5:42:00 AM
Mike please do go ahead with Scientology! Thank you! peaceful write above! Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2010 6:32:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:04:00 PM
very much enjoyed this piece... well written...Michael
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:32:00 PM
Now that is waking up on the right side of the bed, really enjoyed the moring brace, and all the special things you wake up to, Nice done, have a wonderful day,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:32:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, made me feel loved reading this even though it was not for me.
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:05:00 PM
Excellent expressiveness and descriptiveness in this one..The metaphoric language used is great..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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