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Written on October 25, 2023

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In the blushing sunrise, Rose gold and luscious lavender, Promising that daybreak… Stirs souls to hear God’s laughter, Sings of all the pleasures… Revealed when light erases the dark, Leaving the night without the teasing Stars, the quiet moon or the roaring Winds, whispering softly over the life… In the bluish pink skies, Nature’s song pours out her peace, In notes as gentle as the rainfall, Moving the prayers to kiss Away the melancholic dreams, Filling the heart with a sense of relief, Abandoning doubt and insecurity, Telling the thoughts to believe, just believe… In the heartbroken light, Falling softly on the spirit who sees… Remarkable joy, stirring wonders, Who drift into the beautiful, Silencing the nocturnal with all its fear, Muzzling the ache that brings tears, Inviting the music to play tenderness… Through the moments who reach out, Leaving glistening bits of stardust Wherever the legacy of grace stumbles, Testing the seas of yesterday’s Pledge, the words sweating relief…. In the morning, appraise the dewlike Frosting, cool with the night’s liquid tones, Erasing the dusky destiny, Provoking tempting truths, tantalizing Tidbits of honesty, melting Away the awfulness of a past dread, Doubtful and shadowed by sadness, Coloring the future in blessings, Sweetest mercy silencing the heartache, Destroying the hunger, a craving For what comes alive when the past Has subsided and hope brings its light… Sunrise, with all its blushing beauty – Sings softly, calling out with a music, Meant for the stars to cling to, A goodbye to the night, painted with glistening… Rose and traveling through the dawn, Like a lingering spirit who knows… Forever is found in the most simplistic yearning, Feelings who are always burning… Seeking to embrace the lingering of a smile, Painting hearts with heavenly hopes, Histories acquainted with the most precious love, Love so alive it sways, dancing quietly, Amid the leaves of oaks and birth, softening Strengths who need to be persuaded… To listen to the beautiful who resonates through autumn, The beautiful that seeks to bestow… Her riches on the spirit who lingers on her earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/25/2023 2:42:00 PM
You amaze me with the quality of each line, the evocative imagery, and deep message at the end. I love 'sunrise with all its blushing beauty' That's the way I see the never ending sunrises here in Texas. Have a great evening, sweet Gina!
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Date: 10/25/2023 10:59:00 AM
I dont know how you write so many poems and so many with so many great lines and the imagery in this one, especially the first stanza is brilliant.. love this one.
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