Dawn

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Written on October 25, 2023

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In the blushing sunrise,
Rose gold and luscious lavender,
Promising that daybreak…
Stirs souls to hear God’s laughter,
Sings of all the pleasures…
Revealed when light erases the dark,
Leaving the night without the teasing
Stars, the quiet moon or the roaring
Winds, whispering softly over the life…

In the bluish pink skies,
Nature’s song pours out her peace,
In notes as gentle as the rainfall,
Moving the prayers to kiss 
Away the melancholic dreams,
Filling the heart with a sense of relief,
Abandoning doubt and insecurity,
Telling the thoughts to believe, just believe…

In the heartbroken light,
Falling softly on the spirit who sees…
Remarkable joy, stirring wonders,
Who drift into the beautiful,
Silencing the nocturnal with all its fear,
Muzzling the ache that brings tears,
Inviting the music to play tenderness…
Through the moments who reach out,
Leaving glistening bits of stardust
Wherever the legacy of grace stumbles,
Testing the seas of yesterday’s
Pledge, the words sweating relief….

In the morning, appraise the dewlike
Frosting, cool with the night’s liquid tones,
Erasing the dusky destiny,
Provoking tempting truths, tantalizing
Tidbits of honesty, melting
Away the awfulness of a past dread,
Doubtful and shadowed by sadness,
Coloring the future in blessings,
Sweetest mercy silencing the heartache,
Destroying the hunger, a craving
For what comes alive when the past
Has subsided and hope brings its light…

Sunrise, with all its blushing beauty –
Sings softly, calling out with a music,
Meant for the stars to cling to,
A goodbye to the night, painted with glistening…
Rose and traveling through the dawn,
Like a lingering spirit who knows…

Forever is found in the most simplistic yearning, 
Feelings who are always burning…
Seeking to embrace the lingering of a smile,
Painting hearts with heavenly hopes,
Histories acquainted with the most precious love,
Love so alive it sways, dancing quietly,
Amid the leaves of oaks and birth, softening
Strengths who need to be persuaded…
To listen to the beautiful who resonates through autumn,
The beautiful that seeks to bestow…
Her riches on the spirit who lingers on her earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/25/2023 10:59:00 AM
I dont know how you write so many poems and so many with so many great lines and the imagery in this one, especially the first stanza is brilliant.. love this one.
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