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David's Unwritten Psalm

How dare I fix my sinful stare, upon an Angel's beauty fair. Must the heart be pure and just, or quench the thirst of selfish lust. Her every move like silky smoke, every word she softly spoke. Eyes like pools of dark desire, pulled me deep within her fire. Art sculpted by God's own hand, to be the snare of foolish man. One night in Heaven my soul to sell, the price a life of living hell. 7/13/19 Sponsor Mark Toney Contest 20022 Poetry Marathon Mile 6

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Date: 7/21/2019 10:39:00 PM
“Her every move like silky smoke”—very sexy wording and then the mention of the fire... excellent!
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Date: 7/16/2019 9:11:00 AM
I enjoyed this Wren...Well done...
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Wren Rushing
Date: 7/16/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Arturo!
Date: 7/14/2019 4:43:00 AM
Tough choice.. I say go for it.. maybe its worth the pain of hell..
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Wren Rushing
Date: 7/14/2019 11:03:00 AM
A tempting choice indeed, but remember there is joy in sin for a season. Some decisions have a lifetime of impact. Thanks Silent One for visiting. Have a wonderful day my friend!

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