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David For David

DAVID and Goliath Sling shot, small man, Trust me it is all in God’s hand Think of me as the underdog who sang up the hill- “I think I can, I think I can!” The little Israelites that could Giants if you are reading this poem You have nothing on this young shepherd boy Knocking down the hulking bully David W, are you here listening? All David's win with bravery holding on to faith in God. I’m a king you’re a King. -Sandy 11-3-12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:20:00 AM

awesome, stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:16:00 AM

once again. ..awesome write

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/3/2013 6:37:00 AM

Go David! I love that story. Did you catch the Bible series on the History channel? It was good. Also, thank you for the place in your contest. I enjoyed it!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest SandyIvy. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2012 7:40:00 AM

Many congratulations on your super win my dear Libra Mate! This is a great write and I love it! Thank you so much for my placement in your contest. More power and blessings to you my dear friend, SandyIvy! love/hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/13/2012 12:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sandy, well done xx

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/12/2012 7:22:00 PM

:) I'm still sending your poetry DIRECTLY to David's personal email. K? And I still would like to contact Soup. Hell's bells, this kinda thing can really mess up the contests for all -- judges and those entering, and (lol) most of us do both! Have a good evening...uh, are you Aussie? If so I mean Good morning :) Hugs

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/12/2012 7:07:00 PM

Okay, we're going to give this a go! I added one more space, its no longer "locked" but open, yet the contest is judged (?) I've got no idea what is going to happen if you try to resubmit but go for it! If that doesn't work. I will try to reopen the contest and take it off the winners page but I have no idea what kind of chaos will ensue next! Please, give it a go! Didn't stick? Man, never heard of this before! And I've been here for a year and a half now. Please, if you're there, do this asap

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/12/2012 6:54:00 PM

Do let me know asap, I need to contact soup admin if either of the two scenarios below did not happen! I am so sorry, however this occured, as this is a lovely poem and I want david to see it. Can I copy and paste it into my blog?? You're lovely in every way! And this poem is smile enducing!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/12/2012 6:50:00 PM

k, I triple checked. I went to my all poems on the contest admin page and searched again, then I counted the entries to make sure. All 35 are there. Now, something weird happened this morning. I had 35, then someone pulled their entry. then a last entry got in. The only other thing I can think is that I had started to lock my contest but it wasn't closed yet--everyone sees a N/A until it is officially locked and loaded (on the winners page) Did you remove the poem? Mystery solved :) LET ME KNOW!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/12/2012 6:40:00 PM

Sandy, I'm confused... I do not see this on my page. Can you please double check your contests entered link on your member's page before I contact Soup admin??? This is weird. I will look yet again. This has happened to me that I did not actually enter the contest, but you say you see a N/A?? What the...??? I'll be right back after I check again.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 11/12/2012 4:41:00 AM

I love this poem on the shepherd boy who conquered a giant. David has been a great inspiration to me as a young girl. I am writing my own poem on this handsome young man who was the father of the wisest king in Israel. Thanks for my placement in your contest. Love 'Dupe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2012 8:19:00 PM

WOW SANDYIVY A WONDERFUL WRITE AND TRIBUTE PIECE TO OUR OWN DAVID .. BEING BRAVE AND FACING MUCH IN LIFE .. WINNING WISHES LUV .. THANKXX FOR MY WIN IN HURRICANE HAIKU .. WE EXPERIENCED THE REAL THING IN N.J. WITH 'SANDY' BARRELING THRU AND A SNOWSTORM LAST NIGHT .. SO APPRECIATE THE HONOR AND RECOGNITION .. GLAD U ENJOYED MY WORK ..

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/4/2012 3:59:00 AM

Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun

Date: 11/4/2012 1:29:00 AM

Super wow my libramate, SandyIvy for this marvelous dedication poem and a song for me! David in the bible was really my favourite story when I was young. You're so creative in your words associating David W with small David who's Great of His Bravery! Indeed, they're (2 Davids) are both great! Very inspiring and spirit uplifting poem, too! Big win for for sure! Good luck always! love/hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2012 2:27:00 PM

A very good poem to this contest Sandy, it will be on the winning list, well done and good luck. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2012 2:09:00 PM

Great King that you chose to use to encourage David..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading ...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/3/2012 2:05:00 PM

Sandy, I love this sling shot and all.... ..enjoyed your poem~always~LINDA