Notes About The Poem

6/6/2024 for Bio Poem Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper

Dave Crandall

Dave
Reflective, questioning, introspective, introverted 
Father of Daniel
Lover of Daniel, music, and mathematics
Who feels wonder, gratitude, and sentiment 
Who fears climate change, nuclear war, and ill health 
Who would like to see a passenger pigeon, a Tyrannosaurus Rex, and Pentangle in concert
Resident of Seal Beach, California
Crandall

Daniel

I admit, I'm awfully proud
Of traits with which my son's endowed - 
Handsome, kind, thoughtful, wise, and bright. 
Could it be, I did something right?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ashley Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 10:13 PM
Dear David, what a wonderful and heartwarming bio poem this is. I enjoyed getting to know you a bit better through your expressive and beautiful verse. Your pride in your son shines! Indeed you did something right. Congratulations for your win in Eve’s contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Susan - I'll be paying your bio a visit!
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Creative winner with this informative work about you and your family. Congratulations!! Way to go. Thanks for sharing this with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Sara!
mysore Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 1:58 AM
Honored to know you dear reflective poet. Happy writing.
Crandall Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 6:56 PM
Likewise, Thriveni...taking a trip over to your bio!
Woods Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Love it David! Showing your pride in your son warms my heart. I don't feel you with the T-Rex wish though! Lol. Good to know more about you!
Crandall Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 11:15 AM
I think I would like to see one, but only at a safe distance :-)
Greenhough Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 3:24 PM
A nice bio and an interesting poem. That poem could be mine, except it has to change son to daughter. I'm proud of her too. Thanks for both bio and poem. Good luck with the contest.
Crandall Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 3:35 PM
Thanks Hilda, having a kid gives a kind of fulfillment like no other, it seems.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace