Dauntless River

A river which glitters like a silver snake
Looked upon from this astonishing height
As it carves a chasm through the mountain stone
After centuries of persistent fight

Watching as the river forges on,
How can a person who has stood in awe  
Think his life beset by harsh adversity
Believing to be crushed by one last straw

As he watches the waters tumble and flow
He might learn that to reach a long life goal
He needs only to hold one course through life
And that it helps to have a dauntless soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 12, 2011 at 3:22 PM
To stand by the Grand Canyon through it's neons in time. To watch the Colorado River, in it's timeless grind. In time-lapse what a joy, to be the one to look down. Would I marvel at her power, or sigh in saddened frown. <*> Another terrific piece Carrie. These themes of poetry are a joy to my eyes. Many thanks for your always kind words. You are indeed a most lovely lady, ((( hugs ))) from Bonnie Scotland :)
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June 30, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Awesome write, Carrie! Very inspiring and well thought out. Great imagery! Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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June 30, 2011 at 1:34 PM
I can not believe the writes that are pouring out on the 'Soup' these last few dayz....wonderful write dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend Carrie, I truly enjoy your writes ! Much love, james
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June 30, 2011 at 6:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carrie. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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June 29, 2011 at 6:50 PM
lovely lines Carrie feeling the flow and beauty of this river and contest entry.. good luck luv..
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