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May- 7- 2024
 Delphic, Disaster, Dauntless, Words Poetry Contest
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“Put on the dauntless spirit of resolution”. ~ By William Shakespeare
 
Meet this dweller of the icy continent
Among the few, he is the chief occupant
Out in that territory, it is freezing cold
With nothing but a sea of whiteness to behold
In this far stretching desert of ice
Live the emperor penguins wise
They are birds erect, not designed for flight
Neatly dressed in suits of black and white
They remind us of nuns dressed in white 
With hoods in black and souls contrite

The penguins thrive in snow and sleet
That to them is never an easy feat
 Over the ice they smoothly waddle
And in water with flippers, they paddle

Strangely, it is in the peak of winter they breed
When nature goes scarce with food to feed
After a period of intimate courtship
Into responsible parenthood they slip
The female lays a single egg
Never one more, even if we beg
Right away she goes on a feeding spree
Appointing her husband as designee
To guard over the egg and keep close watch
Until the young one is ripe to hatch

Do you know how it incubates the egg?
He balances it on the feet of his leg

Till the young one is out, he refuses to eat or drink
A rare sacrifice of which we can hardly think
In this period, he thrives solely on body fat
And in course, he loses half his weight
At last, from the egg, when the chick is out
It is not allowed to go to the ice direct
But is locked inside the parent’s brood pouch
Where the little one feels comfy as on a couch
If it ever dares to venture out
It will freeze to death, no doubt

The emperors thus live on the razor edge of life
And their lives with challenges are rife
Yet with dauntless resolution, they face their fate
And against all adversities, their life they celebrate
With their densely packed layers of plumage
They keep their bodies from serious damage
When comes the blasting breath of the blizzards
As a precaution to skim over the hazards,
From their territories, they rally en bloc together 
Huddling tight for warmth in the biting weather

 Don’t you think the penguin is an emperor
 Who subdues his hostile territory with prudent care?
 A longer version of the bird’s dauntless endeavor is our life
 An arduous climb through perils, pain and strife!

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Date: 7/20/2024 1:07:00 PM
They are unique and a very interesting species. My daughter used to like anything about penguins. Thanks for sharing this information in poetic form about them. Sara K
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Date: 5/9/2024 1:14:00 AM
I always though penguins were cute , now as i read this sweet valsa, i learn so much more about penguins and how they breed and when they do along with so much more in the most eloquent manner youv educated us readers, so creative are your rhymes too here and i love how you mentioned nuns , i always thought some muslim women how they dress do look like that too. Similar. Because of the color black. This is so refreshing and so insightful a fave for me because i enjoyed reading and learning. BOL
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Date: 5/7/2024 9:59:00 AM
Nice informative poem on penguines. I like Joe's comparison with Taylor Swift.
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Date: 5/7/2024 9:09:00 AM
"Don’t you think the penguin is an emperor Who subdues his hostile territory with prudent care? A longer version of the bird’s dauntless endeavor is our life An arduous climb through perils, pain and strife!" -- lovely, wonderful informative poem. I learned a lot. I think children would do better if taught to emulate the penguin instead of Taylor Swift.
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Date: 5/7/2024 8:43:00 AM
Dear Valsa, You beautifully capture the essence of their parental devotion and sacrificial love, highlighting the extraordinary lengths to which they go to ensure the survival of their offspring. The description of the male penguin's unwavering commitment to protecting the egg, even at the cost of his well-being, is particularly moving. Like these resilient birds, we, too, must navigate through adversity with dauntless resolution and unwavering determination. You have inspired us to face life's challenges with courage and grace. Loved It! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:47:00 AM
Dear Valsa, This is an exemplary poem depicting the lives of "dauntless" Penguins. Sounds like you have done some research on this topic - it is really incredible how the father-penguin protects the eggs, while mother looks for food! Your poem is outstanding with detailed descriptions of the life of these amazing creatures! Love and warm wishes, Dearest Poet~
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Date: 5/7/2024 4:07:00 AM
i am always fascinated by nature, penguins adapt themselves to coldness, no one else can do that, what an original poem, i learnt a lot yann
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Date: 5/7/2024 12:20:00 AM
Amazing creatures, I don't like it too cold but they take it to another level. Enjoyable read Valsa. Tom
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