Daughter of the Gods

Love is blind 
To all the perils 
That lie dormant in the mind
Beyond the limits of transgression.

A mortal maiden golden-haired
Priestess of Athena, daughter of the gods
By Poseidon with persuasive honeyed words was wooed 
She melted in their alluring warmth and charm.

With guile concealed and flattery he urged her on 
Her defences crumbled; the drawbridge lowered 
To reveal the gateway to her heart 
Forgotten were the vows of celibacy.

Beneath his touch her senses reeled 
Her eyelids closed in expectation
He took his chance with urgent need and greed 
Her virgin spoils were taken.

As trembling bodies rode the waves of love and lust
Tremors shook the earth, the ocean heaved; the wind enraged
Swept o’er the land and lightning flashed across the sky.
Such was the wrath of gods defied and disobeyed
Terrible and eternal punishment they bestowed.

The mortal maiden golden-haired 
A repulsive hideous monster she became
Her fair unblemished skin gave way to loathsome green
Her bloodshot eyes in terror gazed, their previous lustre gone
Each lock of hair a writhing snake that hissed and spouted venom.

Condemned beyond mercy she fled to distant land 
Where cursed and shunned she lived in great despair
Turning into stone whosoever fell beneath her vengeful gaze.

At last Perseus took her life. Aided by Athena’s mirrored shield  
His scythe tore into flesh and bone; her severed head was lifted high.
Medusa’s misery and shame came to an end
Death – the final liberating act.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ward Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:12 AM
A stirring tale, made the more so by your poem's re-telling. Julia, xx
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Thank you Julia. Pleased that you found this poem to your liking. Hugs // paul
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December 21, 2014 at 2:08 PM
I loved all the layers of this piece, you did a fantastic job of telling your story. Thanks for reading my Orange Crush poem, I have now finished part three.
Callus Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Thank you Richard...love your comments. Will now go and catch up with your series. // paul
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December 1, 2014 at 11:57 AM
As a lover of all kinds of mythology, you thoroughly captivated me with this mesmerizing Greecian piece! Brilliant storyteller and poet that you are, you skillfully brought Medusa's tale to life as she transformed from maiden to monster. Excellent work, Paul. All the best, Pandita.
Callus Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 2:07 PM
I'm flattered, Pandita! Your feedback is always a source of encouragement...Thank you! Warm regards...paul
Hicks Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:10 PM
I'm not super familiar with all the ties to Greek mythology - but this was fantastic! I never imagined Medusa being, at one point, a "mortal maiden golden-haired", but it makes her story all the more interesting. Symbolic of outward beauty turning into poison. Great work, my friend!
Callus Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Hi Timothy, good to see you around again!! According to the Roman poet Ovid, Medusa was a beauty! She had 2 other sisters, but seems that she was the only mortal one. The contrast between the beautiful and ugly maiden is one of the main things I aimed at pointing out; hope it worked. Cheers my friend! // paul
Yvonne Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Wow Paul, what an inspired write this is. I read it several times at first for meaning then just for the music and then a few times more to savor every word.
Callus Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Maurice...you wow me! You are a brave person reading my poem so many times:) I'm sending this reply, hoping to get you to read it one more time!! Have a nice weekend my friend. // paul
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:45 AM
- Greek mythology - Very clever, dramatic and interesting written, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise, for reading and commenting on my Medusa write; glad you enjoyed. /x/ paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:08 AM
i know this character well.. tragic and indeed sad... sometime before though it isn't much incorporated in our literature subject i read some stories of gods and goddesses... and this one of those.. :) i like how you simplified the story of her.. somehow true love being fought for sometimes the prize is death and misery.. !!! well written Paul!
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 1:51 PM
I am pleased that you found my Medusa to your liking. Yes, hers is a sad and tragic situation. Love can give both joy and heartache. Thank you for the insightful comments Olive _eloi!:) hugs // paul
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November 19, 2014 at 5:11 AM
this one of the stories I read before.. i esp like your 3rd stanza.. :)! the first three lines of this is a wow.. :) and as I progress reading you make the both the plot more interesting as well as there is a build up of emotions why you portray this.. :) a poem well- narrated and drawn.. :)!
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:29 PM
I had not known the background story of this particular mythological character before today!!
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 12:41 PM
.....I studied all about Medusa, Gorgons, and other such characters in secondary school (start of my teenage years!) I loved it! // paul
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:28 PM
OH MY, you sure brought THIS sad tragedy to life!! VERY well told!!
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Thank you, Andrea....
Meade Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:32 PM
A master story teller -- dangerous are her eyes that turn men's hearts to stone -- nicely done my friend.
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Thank you David; I don't usually write this long, but the temptation overcame me! // paul
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November 18, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Dear Paul: Lovely write. Lovely read. Well done my friend. Leon
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting positively my friend Leon! Be seeing you. // paul
Parker Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 5:56 PM
no anger is deeper than when ones own selfworth and dignity is stolen by their own weakness... by their own hands they fall from grace to reveal who they truly are...my first thought after reading this excellent poem
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:34 PM
You are right Frederic. We can easily be the cause of our own downfall. Remorse usually arrives when it is too late. Thank you for stopping by. // paul
Vaso Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 5:41 PM
I love how you weaved this tale in a poem. I particularly loved the lines "Her defences crumbled; the drawbridge lowered To reveal the gateway to her heart" A7 Paul!
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Thank you for finding the time to visit, Arthur my friend; I know you're a busy man! So pleased you found enjoyment in this write....and txs for the high rating. // paul
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November 18, 2014 at 5:14 PM
This is a beautiful write! Paul my dear friend well written and love all these mythology and Godss and goddesses heroes but here you have imprinted some of your own wisdom too and make it part of the whole picture.and this what makes it even better. Enjoyed it! A 7 for me! : ) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:31 PM
You read my poem well my dear Dorian! Mythology can be very inspiring; a touch of extra imagination will go a long way to give it a personal imprint. Thank you!:) /x/ paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 5:09 PM
You make this myth come to life with your words. Your fifth stanza written with such class. A poetic masterpiece! I loved it Paul!#7
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Many thanks Connie...you are too kind, but I admit that I enjoyed every word you wrote!:) Take care. // paul
Nance Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 4:50 PM
Interesting story! Thanks for sharing sweetie :) :)
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Thanks for reading, Casarah! Hope you enjoyed. // paul
Chircop Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 4:31 PM
I love the way you gave the tale of Medusa life ,Paul.My cousin who id an artist used to paint a lot of images ,one of his favourites was medusa.I wonder if She still is. I really enjoyed it,Paul.I love the greek mythology and this is Outstanding,Charma.
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Hi Charm! Greek mythology has always fascinated me; Medusa and the Gorgons being among my favourite characters. I doubt if I know your cousin, but I know of two artists who carry your surname; one of them used to teach with me in Safi school, back in 1984. Thanks for the visit and support. // paul
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