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Daughter of Fall

Daughter
of Fall's twilight
walks on moistened garden, 
awakening sweet quietude
from earth.

Such lure
calms fresh meadows
as tinted boughs flutter
with evening's washed golden pallet,
her gift.


Contest No 360 of Brian Strand

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2015

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Skat A Date: 10/29/2015 9:02:00 PM Awesome Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/29/2015 3:47:00 PM beautiful one, Nette. I need to go see the winners now to see what placement you got. I bet a high one. Congrats! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 10/28/2015 9:08:00 PM A spectacular write, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Greg Hoffman Date: 10/27/2015 2:17:00 PM Congrats on your win Nette Login to Reply

Thomas Martin Date: 10/27/2015 11:07:00 AM Excellent! Very original metaphors on Autumn! Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 10/27/2015 7:36:00 AM Lush images! Congratulations on your win. You should definitely think about doing the Rattle Ekphrastic challenge. I know I would see your name as as winner. Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 10/26/2015 9:28:00 PM Congratulation nette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/26/2015 9:06:00 PM Congratulations! CayCay Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 6:50:00 PM very beautiful Nette - congrats:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/26/2015 6:48:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for participating in my contest. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 10/26/2015 6:41:00 PM Lovely double Cinquain, Nette, full of calm and beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 10/26/2015 2:03:00 PM The beauty is oozing out from your Poem like the beauty is spreading its charms in the alluring picture of the Daughter of Fall. Great write dear friend. My good wishes for your superb entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 10/26/2015 11:22:00 AM A well and beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest Nette....love always...........A.M. Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 10/25/2015 9:02:00 PM Well crafted and soothing Nette! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 10/25/2015 7:48:00 PM my mind filled with gold leaves spinning earthward, your poem took me on a peaceful stroll..good luck Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/25/2015 11:41:00 AM This visual has inspired you to a duo of captivating Cinquains, Nette. What a delightful offering!! You never falter in your stride...#7 Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 10/25/2015 8:55:00 AM This is beautiful, Nette. Delight for the season speaks through all your lines. Best! hugs! Login to Reply

Franco Gonza Date: 10/25/2015 2:38:00 AM It isn't easy to weave the natural grace of autumn, still you managed to brush it so effortlessly into a graceful canvas. Great personification! Login to Reply

Ashley Conte Date: 10/25/2015 2:28:00 AM The language you have offered here awakens all the senses, joyfully celebrating the new season, a gift of mother earth's comfort! Marvelous poetry! Login to Reply