Nette Onclaud Poet Cinquain

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Daughter of Fall

Daughter
of Fall's twilight
walks on moistened garden, 
awakening sweet quietude
from earth.

Such lure
calms fresh meadows
as tinted boughs flutter
with evening's washed golden pallet,
her gift.


Contest No 360 of Brian Strand

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Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:02 PM Awesome

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2015 at 3:47 PM beautiful one, Nette. I need to go see the winners now to see what placement you got. I bet a high one. Congrats!

Kim Merryman October 28, 2015 at 9:08 PM A spectacular write, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Greg Hoffman October 27, 2015 at 2:17 PM Congrats on your win Nette

Thomas Martin October 27, 2015 at 11:07 AM Excellent! Very original metaphors on Autumn!

Monterey Sirak October 27, 2015 at 7:36 AM Lush images! Congratulations on your win. You should definitely think about doing the Rattle Ekphrastic challenge. I know I would see your name as as winner.

Michael Tor October 26, 2015 at 9:28 PM Congratulation nette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CayCay Godwin October 26, 2015 at 9:06 PM Congratulations! CayCay

Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 6:50 PM very beautiful Nette - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper October 26, 2015 at 6:48 PM Congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for participating in my contest.

Sandra Haight October 26, 2015 at 6:41 PM Lovely double Cinquain, Nette, full of calm and beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Ravindra K Kapoor October 26, 2015 at 2:03 PM The beauty is oozing out from your Poem like the beauty is spreading its charms in the alluring picture of the Daughter of Fall. Great write dear friend. My good wishes for your superb entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Afolabi Muideen October 26, 2015 at 11:22 AM A well and beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest Nette....love always...........A.M.

Ken Carroll October 25, 2015 at 9:02 PM Well crafted and soothing Nette!

Frederic Parker October 25, 2015 at 7:48 PM my mind filled with gold leaves spinning earthward, your poem took me on a peaceful stroll..good luck

Paul Callus October 25, 2015 at 11:41 AM This visual has inspired you to a duo of captivating Cinquains, Nette. What a delightful offering!! You never falter in your stride...#7 Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez October 25, 2015 at 8:55 AM This is beautiful, Nette. Delight for the season speaks through all your lines. Best! hugs!

Franco Gonza October 25, 2015 at 2:38 AM It isn't easy to weave the natural grace of autumn, still you managed to brush it so effortlessly into a graceful canvas. Great personification!

Ashley Conte October 25, 2015 at 2:28 AM The language you have offered here awakens all the senses, joyfully celebrating the new season, a gift of mother earth's comfort! Marvelous poetry!