Dating Six Sues

He set up his weekend
By texting Susie
Susan, Sue, Suzette
Suzanne and Suzy

But he mixed up his Z’s
Ettes, ans, and I E’s
They hollered and cursed
So each name he rehearsed

He went out with Suzy
That’s Sue with a Z
Before dating Susie
Ending in I E

Then Susan called up
To go for a date
Yet was it Suzanne
Whom he saw of late?

While out with Suzy
Susan he did see
Or was it Suzette
With her T T E

No matter the Sue
That came onto him
He dated each one
And they called him Tim

But Suzy turned iffy
She left in a jiffy
And Sue, he knew
Was always quite blue

He grew tired of Susan
Who was always snoozin’
While Suzette, did get
Herself into debt

He kept seeing Suzanne
Who paid her own way
But she disappeared
Tuesday or Friday

Though he saw many Sues
This man was quite shy
But felt very lucky
All were worth a try

But he always had
His eyes set on Susie	
Who was his true Sue
Plus Susie did choose he
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Jones Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 4:41 AM
I’m going to say Tim is a “player” of women. Lol congratulations on your creative writing win!
Romios Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 9:35 AM
It is more than clever, in my book, I could not write with such, bounce. flair and lightness of spirit. And that’s what makes us unique. I tend to focus on the value of life. Not popular here. I am not in love with nature-save for domestic animals . Truth, philosophy is a no no. Politics which should be addressed….most run from, And not only the US@, all countries on the chopping block. I enjoyed your poem. From one who has no place here, Pangie.
Loving Iii Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 7:41 PM
CReative .
M  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Very creative and fun poem David….busy man!! Debx
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