Date Night a Revision of May I
Come take my hand
and walk for a while.
Bring your beauty, your goodness,
that strawberry blond smile.
To an open buffet,
a cherry souffle,
with honey dipped toppings
of laughter and play.
Where we`ll swirl and we`ll twirl
through God`s given treats.
Unfurl a whirl
into heavenly sweets.
An evening of bliss
not costing a cent.
Then lie beneath that fortune
...cookie tree of content.
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