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Date at Arby's

Jealous Jillian meets zealous Philip at Arby’s. With ONE green eye she spies his double-order curly fries, No FUN when his French dip starts to drip on her Barbies. She cleans them off and leans close in to his plate SNEAKING a meager handful while eager Phil tries to confess for the FREAKING mess he’s made of their date. She orders Smokehouse Brisket; he GETS a gravy/biscuit. PLUS as a “to go” surprise, IT’S two apple pies. THUS Phil walks Jill home. A goodnight kiss? will he risk it?

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Date: 9/27/2024 12:01:00 PM
I enjoyed this fun write Reason, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/28/2024 5:01:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. Appreciate your comment and support. Hoping Helene will pass soon.
Date: 8/30/2024 2:00:00 PM
That's hilarious - good one, Reason
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Date: 8/30/2024 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, David; glad for the hardy smiles.
Date: 8/30/2024 3:21:00 AM
A cute story Poem! A nice use of the words. An Arby’s date, unusual, and yet memorable with two apple pies.
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Date: 8/30/2024 2:06:00 PM
thanks, Kim, having a little fun with words - rhyming addict as I am.
Date: 8/29/2024 3:10:00 PM
Cute poetry, made me smile...I can just picture it
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Date: 8/30/2024 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, Paige. The Barbies put them as middle school age, I hope.

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