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Darlings

they were written upon this very page beautiful souls so little warning trimmed, cut, and killed them- my Darlings can't see dead words they've gone animated shining brilliantly executed

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Date: 11/2/2021 11:53:00 AM
Murder them only for justice sake, not vengeance. Great write Richard! :) Linda
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Date: 9/19/2021 8:32:00 AM
Aw.... so inspiring... I didn't know about this quote Richard.... Thanks for sharing... and a beautiful write... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/24/2021 9:00:00 PM
Anitha, Thank you Anitha, for sharing too.
Date: 9/9/2021 3:59:00 PM
Brilliance from a talented quill and vision of a poet Panagiota ****
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Date: 9/11/2021 9:19:00 PM
Panagiota, Thanks, every dog must have his day. Still waiting for mine, with mustard and sauerkraut. -Richard
Date: 9/8/2021 3:29:00 PM
I never knew that quote before. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/11/2021 9:10:00 PM
Hello Andrea. Thanks, just found it myself. 'Seek and Ye shall find...' But, truth be told, I sure miss my darlings. -Richard
Date: 9/6/2021 7:27:00 PM
Here today and gone tomorrow...
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Date: 9/7/2021 9:33:00 PM
Shirley, Thanks, you said a mouthful. -Richard
Date: 9/6/2021 11:47:00 AM
Oh my goodness! A great write, Richard!
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Date: 9/7/2021 9:32:00 PM
Kim, I really didn't enjoy murdering all the lovely words. Maybe just a little bit. ¯\_(?)_/¯ -Richard
Date: 9/6/2021 8:21:00 AM
Wonderful personification. So interesting, Richard!!
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Date: 9/7/2021 9:31:00 PM
Hello Andrea, “Whenever you feel an impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it—whole-heartedly—and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings,” Sir Arthur Thomas Quiller-Couch
Date: 9/6/2021 6:34:00 AM
Keep on writing, my friend! I hope you have a nice day . :)
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Date: 9/7/2021 9:34:00 PM
Heidi, Thanks, all in a day's work. -Richard
Date: 9/6/2021 4:22:00 AM
Ah, yes we have many little darlings that went to script heaven dear Richard, :(
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Date: 9/7/2021 9:28:00 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, It's hard to let them go, or is to really ...? “Murder your darlings,” is a popular piece of writing advice that is often attributed to William Faulkner, but which can actually be traced back to the English writer and surname collector Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch. -Tin House
Date: 9/5/2021 10:54:00 AM
Evocative potent little poem, lovely penning Richard, a fave pour moi. xomo
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Date: 9/5/2021 12:54:00 PM
TIR, Many thanks from a pauper soul. Not my concept though. Love the new handle BTW.., 'Rib'. Was it taken from Adam I wonder? I could get used to that. -Richard