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Poetry/Lyric/Darkside of Aquarius- Dark
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All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, August 28, 2025
For the International Contest, Darkside of Aquarius
Sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 09/24/2025

Fourth Place

Darkside of Aquarius- Dark

 
Inspired by Bruce Dickenson's song Darkside of Aquarius, from the Accident of Birth Album (Lord of the Rings video) Here is my song- Age of Aquarius a future filled with love and life sweet harmony and peace- But, the future came with a knife the first Hellrider bringing dread, death and the darkside. We were plunged into chaos as a second rider brought us conflict and cold thinking to constrict with a darkness filled with terror fascist dictators reading a script there was no promised land in sight. Realms of enlightenment, of conduct, are crashing into nothingness. Realms of enlightenment, of conduct, are crashing into nothingness. The third rider from hell came with a message to kill our fellow women and men. The fourth wave of riders were the horsemen of the Apocalypse and we watched our crumbling world. The horsemen yelled death to holy men, and thus came an end of all enlightenment, and tarot card reading became a useless tool. Realms of enlightenment, of conduct, are crashing into nothingness. Existential dread and darkness closing in and people are fleeing cities in fear, because of this dark side of Aquarius, and Hellriders who are stealing our minds and souls. Realms of enlightenment, of conduct, are crashing into nothingness. (Guitar Solo) I let the demons chase me to the sea, and the rolling crashing waves. Oh, how close they follow me, only to be washed away in the sea, but more are coming for me ! Got to fight, got to fight, got to ride my white horse. Got to fight, got to fight, got to ride my white horse. Got to fight, got to fight, got to fight the demons, got to fight the demons ! I've got to fight the demons from hell, got to fight the demons from hell. Got to fight the demons from hell, Change the course of Aquarius, change to age of Aquarius. Change the dark side of Aquarius, change the dark side of Aquarius . . . now !
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Derden Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Your song is a thunderous cry against chaos—raw, urgent, and defiant. The imagery is vivid, the rhythm relentless. You channel rebellion with poetic fire.
La France Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Danny, thank you for the great comment, blessings
Hamilton Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Who knew you are a songwriter! Congrats on an excellent song despite the subject matter it is well written. Should do well in the contest.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:09 PM
John, thank you for the compliment, yes the theme was dark, and thanks for the encouragement, blessings
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