Darkness Will Betray You

Dancing in the dark,
                               Winking at the moons slick grin,
                                   Feasting with your flesh,

                                 Asleep in motions madness,
                                 Paralyzed in cheap appeals,
                                Empty pleasures fade to dust,
                                    Frozen from its chill.


      By: Sabina Nicole
      Contest:Senryu:Dodoitsu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/10/2012 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/10/2012 10:15:00 AM
Sabina, congratulations with your win;-) Always~ PD
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/9/2012 7:09:00 PM
A great poem and win Sabina. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/9/2012 8:53:00 AM
congrats Sabina on a brilliant win for this wonderful mesh of forms luv..
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
:)
Date: 3/14/2012 7:44:00 PM
wow, Sabina, this is really good stuff. I predict a GREAT win. at least it would win with ME.
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 3/15/2012 6:15:00 PM
Wow, thank you, that means alot to me!!!
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