Darkness Revisited - Revision

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"Hope begins in the dark."
Anne Lamott

I wrote a blog entry that explains the lineation and syllabification of this poem as well as some of the metaphor.

Thanks for reading. ~beto

some thin king dark clothing dark face dark place may be but more a see ing a sensing of life's realities superfic'alities aware to find deep mean ing and singing the sight of light Collection: Experimental Written 9 January 2020

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/13/2020 9:48:00 PM

Oh my!! Yes, a few words can say so much. Such a powerful message within. Darkness- and light. They certainly collide. ~ Brandy

Beto Riginale
Date: 1/17/2020 3:09:00 PM

Hi Brandy - thanks for your note :-) I wrote a blog entry that explains the lineation and syllabification of this poem as well as some of the metaphor. ~ beto