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Darkness and Dreams

Darkness falls. Oppressive dreams become- Broken promises. Stars seem bright. If this contains any verbs, adverbs, adjectives please let me know as I am terrible at spotting them. thanks.

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Jay Loveless

Date: 1/18/2010 3:50:00 PM

I like this either way =] keep it how it is i say. nice work. and i love the contrast with the last line. its as if there is just a little hope in it all, just a little light in the darkess. i use to stare at the stars in my own darkness. do me a favor? read and comment my lastest write, its called nicks poem. thank you lots xo Rain

Date: 1/17/2010 5:19:00 PM

Falls and becomes would be verbs. Oppressive, broken, and bright are adjectives. Interesting contrast in the last ine. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen