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When you go walking alone in the dark Sometimes you can feel your heart start beating fast As your breathing heavy sometimes you run When you feel like somethings following you, And with all the sounds you hear, You never know what could be out there , So I hope you are aware that there is so many things that creep and crawl around in that pitch black dark darkness, Sometimes its just a shadow, Sometimes its just a wild animal, Sometimes you don’t know, But would you want to see what is out there Creeeping around in the dark, Because it just may make your heart beat faster, And as you run it just may creep up past you So I would rather just know, and beware that there are so many things lurking around out in the dark darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/18/2012 3:45:00 PM
So true Jane, well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/19/2012 3:28:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my poem! It is always nice to see you. Jane xoxo
Date: 7/18/2012 2:11:00 PM
Nice poem (though too scary)... Terry
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/18/2012 3:40:00 PM
Yea I agree but I wrote it for the contest!