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Darkness.

I feel the night wind closing in. My breath deepens. I have only darkness around me. Sweet bright darkness. I want to embrace it. But I cant. I hear thunder as I sing. I sing of love and rain. I cant help but wanting darkness. It fills me. The sweet cold air. Rain begins to come. The soft drops fall onto my back. I have chills from head to toe. I love it. Water is my everything. Water is my power. Water is darkness.

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Skat A

Date: 6/25/2016 10:16:00 PM

Brittany enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2010 2:41:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brittany. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2010 5:12:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... with luv..

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 2:37:00 PM

This is an elegant piece regarding the cleansing power of water. I like the flow and the sequencing of the words. The message is wonderful. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2010 9:02:00 AM

deep and with beauty to it,, nice one,, enjoyed..P.D.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 7/9/2010 4:55:00 AM

nicely open ended, leaves the rest to the imagination, like the opening sceme of a supernatural thriller, nice. Welcome to poetry soup

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/9/2010 3:15:00 AM

I love the darker side of poetry, love poetry is done to death. This dark write was as refreshing as a spring rain. Excellent piece.