Darkness

As I sit here alone in darkness
I see you laugh in the light.
You’re always filled with kindness
Why are you so happy while me, no might?
If I took it from you I should be stricken with blindness.

I still feel for you,
Even though I hate it every minute.
I could go without food
To be with you to no limit.
And now I think of your decisions as not very shrewd.

Now what I wouldn’t do to stop thinking of you
I cannot put into words, humanly impossible.
Now when I see you and him I’m in a bad mood,
But when I see you alone everything seems possible.
When I think of it more and more, I’ve concluded: I love you.

I live in darkness now,
Until I find the right person.
Even though that idea is as likely as a flying cow,
I know I will find that person.
I will live in the light like you, although it may be five, ten, twenty years from now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/17/2010 7:46:00 AM
I have similar feelings for who I feel to be perfect in every way.... A young, extremely attractive, successful woman who wears her heart on her sleeve... She is my best friend... We could be together, intimate once a year and I would be satisfied... For me to say that is..... WOW.... She is perfect in every way!! she knows, everyone who knows us, knows that we will eventually become one......Good work my friend.....:JP]
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