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Darkness

''As you sit and wonder, your soul torn ashunder, the daemon appears, offering immortallity, you want it to leave you be, but what a promising gift you see, so you take it, full heartedly you take it, and become a daemon too, you blink and ask how this could be true, so now your the devil's slave, sitting in the darkness of your cave, faithfully like a dog, you do his biding, but then you realize, it's your own throat that your slitting, you thought it was a gift, but far from it, the Devil has your soul now, don't you feel the lucky one''

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/10/2010 12:54:00 PM
once again wonderful thank you duncan
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:18:00 AM
i really liked this poem, it's right up my alley. =)
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:15:00 PM
Praise God there is always hope. The way back after one turns around or leaves the satan's hold is a difficult one but not impossible. Interesting topic that you have written about here today. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:43:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Samantha. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:30:00 AM
Oh yeah... I love your name it is very striking. have a great day Samantha Search! Scarlett
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:27:00 AM
I like this writing. Keep writing and thanks for sharing with me. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:03:00 AM
This is great Sam! Welcome to soup! Oh and lol I am sitting right next to you.
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