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Darkness - Tableau

Clicking of beetles Whispers of scorched leaves Sniff of burning wood Eerie silent path Peered into darkness With a ray of hope Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Syllable Counter: PS Date: 21-03-2021 Place: 2nd

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Date: 3/26/2021 1:37:00 PM
Hi Patri, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/28/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 3/26/2021 1:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win Patri, Very nicely penned
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/28/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 3/26/2021 9:24:00 AM
Very nice. I enjoyed the imagery here!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 3/28/2021 8:18:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments

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