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Darkest Hour

Darkest hour of the night And Moon it shrivels Out of sight; clash of steel Inside his head, a Gladiator Falls down dead.The victor Stands behind his shield And raises sword to crowd’s Appeal; plebeian shrieks Of horrid joy celebrate A life destroyed. The dreamer turns within His bed and contemplates The slave that's dead; another Image forms inside, more Secrets that he won’t Confide.Ten foot lances Battle spread, hundreds poised In line ahead ; imagine Men impaled on spears Like Shish Kebab and Dripping tears. Darkest hour passes by The Moon it shines high In the sky. Clouds they Part , and stars resolve And snoozing heads Dreams soon dissolve. Dropping like a stone Down deep, he vanishes In darkest sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2010 10:53:00 PM
Interesting thought process, David. It is really excellent writing. Your words make it very gruesome. Darkest indeed. Thank you for your kind word on "my first breath". The poem didn't even make honorable mention, but it has much meaning for me. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/17/2010 2:03:00 AM
Great write. I really liked this one......Aleera
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:26:00 PM
David, in another time....this poem could be about that hidden conqueror in you. Insightful tale and wondering if this is for a contest? Thanks for commenting on my poems too. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:42:00 PM
Reminds me of those Gladiator movies I luv so much... great energetic words and imagism is so profound in your lines David.. amazing picture u paint in words.. thankxxx for your sweet and cool comments.. but I am Italian so I never cool off with my luv poetry..haha.. glad u enjoyed them...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/11/2010 1:06:00 PM
Very nice one (for the contest?) I have so many dream poems, but gosh, my dreams were none of her topics, dang it! Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/11/2010 8:20:00 AM
Very well written imagery, remembers the darkest hour in human history...sadly. Thank you for sharing your words. (And thank you for your recent comments on my poetry as well.) Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:56:00 AM
David thank you for your kind words today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/10/2010 10:59:00 PM
Wow...nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/10/2010 8:53:00 PM
cool rhyme a dream? or thought from olden times?
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