Darkest Hour

Darkest hour of the night
And Moon it shrivels
Out of sight; clash of steel
Inside his head, a Gladiator
Falls down dead.The victor
Stands behind his shield
And raises sword to crowd’s
Appeal; plebeian shrieks
Of horrid joy celebrate
A life destroyed. 

The dreamer turns within
His bed and contemplates
The slave that's dead; another
Image forms inside, more
Secrets that he won’t 
Confide.Ten foot lances 
Battle spread, hundreds poised 
In line ahead ; imagine
Men impaled on spears
Like Shish Kebab and
Dripping tears.

Darkest hour passes by
The Moon it shines high
In the sky. Clouds they 
Part , and stars resolve
And snoozing heads 
Dreams soon dissolve.
Dropping like a stone
Down deep, he vanishes
In darkest sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/13/2010 10:53:00 PM
Interesting thought process, David. It is really excellent writing. Your words make it very gruesome. Darkest indeed. Thank you for your kind word on "my first breath". The poem didn't even make honorable mention, but it has much meaning for me. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/17/2010 2:03:00 AM
Great write. I really liked this one......Aleera
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:26:00 PM
David, in another time....this poem could be about that hidden conqueror in you. Insightful tale and wondering if this is for a contest? Thanks for commenting on my poems too. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:42:00 PM
Reminds me of those Gladiator movies I luv so much... great energetic words and imagism is so profound in your lines David.. amazing picture u paint in words.. thankxxx for your sweet and cool comments.. but I am Italian so I never cool off with my luv poetry..haha.. glad u enjoyed them...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/11/2010 1:06:00 PM
Very nice one (for the contest?) I have so many dream poems, but gosh, my dreams were none of her topics, dang it! Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/11/2010 8:20:00 AM
Very well written imagery, remembers the darkest hour in human history...sadly. Thank you for sharing your words. (And thank you for your recent comments on my poetry as well.) Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:56:00 AM
David thank you for your kind words today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/10/2010 10:59:00 PM
Wow...nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/10/2010 8:53:00 PM
cool rhyme a dream? or thought from olden times?
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