Darker-Days Bliss

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Altitude of Autumn— bitty kites without strings attached from God’s cache. Over the top joy— elixir of Jack Frost, Jacques Torres chocolate, crackling of hearths. Vouchsafed variegation of leaves, mulligan and goulash, the swaddle of sweaters. Patch of giant and itty bitty crocks of seeds and mellow pulp to be roasted and pie’d, then lit. Impresario of Fall— twirls and dips, brightens and lightens in darker-days bliss. 9/9/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2021 6:16:00 AM

I have to see what this is now " Jacques Torres chocolate," - beautiful imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2021 5:02:00 AM

The hot chocolate was to die for! My son, being a chef, wanted to check it out. Mmm…so good!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2021 1:28:00 PM

Lovely autumn poem. We'll be seeing more of these.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 2:56:00 PM

Yes, we will! A perfect day here in Georgia ~ blue skies and pretty clouds. Have a great day, my friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/9/2021 8:08:00 AM

We may have darker days but it's not all doom and gloom, we make the best of it and patiencely await springs return. Hope your week is going well Kim. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 8:46:00 AM

Finding bliss in each season :)

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2021 8:05:00 AM

A delght filled poem Kim to match the pics,especially the third

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Brian!