Dark World

Mammoth monsters drag a weapon along their path,
as lava flows all around them. The weapon is invisible
to the human eye; only in the dark realms of Hades
that the malevolent dwellers can see an evil
that can swallow the Sun.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/11/2015 2:05:00 PM
Your fantasy and imagination combine to give a great interpretation of this 'monster' visual, Teddy. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 7:01:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying and applauding my work Paul! ;-)
Date: 11/8/2015 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 11/8/2015 12:08:00 PM
Teddy congratulations on your placement with this wonderful write
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 6:58:00 AM
Thanks BW! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 11/8/2015 10:21:00 AM
This is fantastic, Teddy. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 11/8/2015 9:52:00 AM
Hi Teddy: Congratulations on a terrific win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for your applause and enjoying my work Ralph! ;-)
Date: 11/7/2015 11:23:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 6:54:00 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you for your applause! ;-)
Date: 11/7/2015 8:11:00 PM
Congrats,so scary n wow.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 6:53:00 AM
Lol. Thanks Rizwana! ;-)
Date: 11/7/2015 6:20:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2015 6:52:00 AM
Thanks once again Skat! *^_^* The contest was awesome! <3 <3
Date: 10/29/2015 7:57:00 PM
Boy! oh Boy! I never really spied into hell until now. Well done. Excellent. Greek?
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/30/2015 12:47:00 AM
Lol. It is a fusion of Greek mythology and fantasy..... Thanks for enjoying my work Zaladin! ;-)
Date: 10/29/2015 12:22:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned .. Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/30/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Sara! *^_^* You are always very much welcome! ;-)
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