Dark World

Mammoth monsters drag a weapon along their path,
as lava flows all around them. The weapon is invisible
to the human eye; only in the dark realms of Hades
that the malevolent dwellers can see an evil
that can swallow the Sun.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Your fantasy and imagination combine to give a great interpretation of this 'monster' visual, Teddy. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:01 AM
Thank you for enjoying and applauding my work Paul! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
La France Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 12:08 PM
Teddy congratulations on your placement with this wonderful write
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Thanks BW! *^_^* <3 <3
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 10:21 AM
This is fantastic, Teddy. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:57 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! *^_^* <3 <3
Sergi Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Hi Teddy: Congratulations on a terrific win!
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Thanks for your applause and enjoying my work Ralph! ;-)
Y. Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you for your applause! ;-)
Bhurani Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Congrats,so scary n wow.
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:53 AM
Lol. Thanks Rizwana! ;-)
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Thanks once again Skat! *^_^* The contest was awesome! <3 <3
Juman Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Boy! oh Boy! I never really spied into hell until now. Well done. Excellent. Greek?
Kimathi Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Lol. It is a fusion of Greek mythology and fantasy..... Thanks for enjoying my work Zaladin! ;-)
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Interesting thoughts penned .. Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Thanks Sara! *^_^* You are always very much welcome! ;-)
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