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Dark Waters

The other girls were Shallow Waters. Catching Sunlight with ease, and gleaming crystal clear. She was as deep as the Ocean. And the further you dive into her, The Darker the waters get. -December 7, 2017

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Date: 7/28/2019 11:49:00 AM
Enjoyed, pithy work and you said it well.
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:43:00 AM
You said a handful in these words. Dark waters, dangerous place to be dancing. I did like this one.
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Date: 12/1/2018 6:51:00 AM
Well done, Julia, there is mystery in the dark waters. Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 11/29/2018 3:44:00 AM
Very nicely done, Julia - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! This is divine, and I'm fav-ing, (I don't do that a lot), thank you for sharing! :-) <3
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Julia Ford
Date: 11/29/2018 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Date: 11/26/2018 11:14:00 PM
Julia,congratulations on your win.
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Julia Ford
Date: 11/29/2018 8:47:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 11/26/2018 1:46:00 PM
Dark waters always more mysterious and alluring, congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:13:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Julia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 11:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Julia. Well penned.
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Date: 11/24/2018 9:43:00 PM
Excellent job! from the heart I'd say
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Julia Ford
Date: 11/24/2018 11:46:00 PM
Thank you!:)
Date: 11/20/2018 4:34:00 PM
Whoa... this is amazing work. I’m speechless!
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Julia Ford
Date: 11/24/2018 11:45:00 PM
Such kind words, you’re encouragement means so much to me
Date: 11/9/2018 3:20:00 AM
"gleaming crystal clear" is what I loved the best, actually. I believe this poem is.
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Date: 11/8/2018 1:52:00 PM
What Chris said ;) including welcome to Soup! xomo
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Julia Ford
Date: 11/8/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much! <3
Date: 11/8/2018 7:46:00 AM
Wow, I really liked that, nicely crafted. The analogy of shallow and deep was very cool. Welcome to soup.
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