Dark Upon Dawn-The Grimreaper's Visit

With the demise of the midnight dreary
When all mortals,'hope', long to receive
some the morning wish to come
to wash away memories of cut-throat nightmares
some the morning pray to come
to take away the torture of the gloomy darkness
i as well partook in this mass prayer
prayer for morning to come
but as though unto some hellish gods,
the answer to my prayer,behold was more dreary
drearier than my nightmares
nightmares to which i had been condemned to the night before
a hhappy man would i have been,if i was accosted by blood and gore
but no.twas something more dreary,more deadly,more grim
which no mortal man has imagined or in dreams seen
a thinh whose mere appearance spelt doom
which in me inflicted spasms of tempestuous shudders
and behold i dropped,i lay and inly the hourglass can tell
can tell how long lay i,unconscious,the body away from the soul
until consciousness whispered with tyhat piercing sound,shrill
awoke me to yhe bustle and hustle of the midday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/29/2012 9:51:00 PM
N C.., i'm a little late congratulating all my sisters past contest. I'm enjoying all the DARK EERIE POETRY TALES. entries..*Looks like it was a fun CONTEST* Thank you for the entertainment :-) very eeeerie of you... take care~PD
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "Dark Eerie" contest Ndubisi. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2012 2:14:00 PM
thanks babe
Date: 7/26/2012 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write Ndubisi xx
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Date: 7/27/2012 2:13:00 PM
thanks mandy..
Date: 7/25/2012 8:33:00 PM
thanks mehn...you've got cool poems too.they're great
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:30:00 AM
Ndubisi super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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