Dark Thoughts

If there were no poetry or words as art
Who would hear the music in my heart
Would my muse fight to find its way
Or in atrophy die and simply wash away



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNSETTING WHISPERS~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 22, 2020 for contest IF THERE WAS NO POETRY sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 3RD
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Messina Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Very nice, Line. Congrats on your win! Hugs Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Thank you, Charles. Much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:19 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem in S.O. contest, Line :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Thank for your lovely visit and comment, Sunshine.
One Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:37 AM
deep and dark thoughts.. Congrats on your placement in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, SO.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Cannot imagine world without poetry.
Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Thankfully we don't ever have to.
Wolves Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Oh yeah this is awesome...
Gauthier Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much, Running Wolves. Most appreciated.
Horne Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:35 PM
oh, i love this
Gauthier Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Thank you so much, Jack. Most appreciated.
Adams Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 10:58 AM
good one...it's hard for poets to imagine a life without poetry...it would indeed be dark to us.... hugs
Gauthier Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Indeed, Sandra. We love playing with words too much.
Roper Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Well said, Line, good luck in the contest. Eve
Gauthier Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 9:06 AM
The world would be a grim place Line, no soup, where would we hang out. Good luck. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 9:50 AM
It would be terrible indeed. Thanks, Tom.
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