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Dark room

In this pitch black night , Hovers my own thoughts, Dark and burdened, Exhausting to the soul , And acceptable to the spirit. This dark room aligns with my emotions, lifeless and d hopeless, Dull and uninviting , Like the starless sky on a winter night, And like moonless sky in summer. Swayed by emotions, My feet move towards a thorny path , Falling into a pit, A pit of no return, Where emotions are trapped by the mind , And controlled by the heart, A place where despair reigns over, And fear ceases to exist, For it had already broken down my walls, And walked over what was left of my will.

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Date: 2/14/2025 7:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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