Dark Planet

Dark Planet

Black metallic giant planet runs out there in outer space
Out of control, no gravity, no sun, no stars we’re told
Reaching, racing undetected, splits the distance, slips away
Out in the mystery systems held by void
Destinations have no shape or form for dark planet meanderings
In endless night, deepest riches where dark matter hides
Stranger to light, other unseen forms of life take flight     
When explorers found it with their silver space ship
Came upon it by pure chance to land so gently grounded
Met by smooth ores and rocks of charcoal grays and blacks
Except for a fine thin line of artificial light produced            
From a hand held device they used to walk about
The giant world would have sunk back into the frozen void
Undetected forever in the dark with all its truths
Closed its womb on the explorers
Blending in to the raw nothingness deduced  
Alien worlds hide their beauty
Move unnoticed as they should
Leave exploring to the children of the universe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:23 AM
I like this very creative and imaginative poem! Solid 7......
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October 23, 2015 at 11:36 AM
Hi Robert. Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and evaluation. This is one of my personal favorites. I would not change a thing about it. Thanks again. Have a great day. Earl
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