Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Dark Places To Play

by Michael J Falotico
                                         My steps are slowing.

                                 Sunlight fades as shadows crawl..

                                        Soon covered by night.
                           
                                                     Dark

                                                    places

                                               to write from

                                        where hidden thoughts

                        dance without being seen while they play free..


just having fun with two forms
connecting..
an Haiku & Tetractys

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Poet Destroyer A August 21, 2011 at 10:47 PM enjoyed your poem.. p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley August 14, 2011 at 7:50 PM Has a kind of haunting echo to this verse that soothes the mind. A clever verse Michael

Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2011 at 5:01 PM Wow.. I like the idea of having fun with two forms... sounds like a fun little challeng.... how are you? I really miss you and Linda ~marie here on the soup... others don't remember... well I have been off for a bit.. did u get my new poem..I send you.. hope u can work with it.. please please... have a nice one,...p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 14, 2011 at 1:35 PM I really enjoyed this, Michael! Sometimes indeed we need those dark places-- cool way to connect these two forms & ohh shucks! The Soup ran out! is there still some dessert left over?? :D hugs your way!

August 13, 2011 at 7:07 PM Great job on the two forms, yes, the dark likes to come out and play sometimes too. Love Alexa

Dr.Ram Mehta August 13, 2011 at 5:57 PM Beautiful combination of the two forms, Michael

Russell Sivey August 13, 2011 at 3:51 PM I love writing dark but interesting pieces. There's something mystical about them. Thank you for showing us this beautiful work of art!

Dinda Minardi August 13, 2011 at 2:17 PM Mysterious piece of your creative writings. Cool one! :)

Joseph Osita August 13, 2011 at 12:56 PM Very beautiful! "Sunlight fades as shadows crawl" this line is very picturesque.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 13, 2011 at 11:41 AM hope u don't mind Michael but I attempted to do a combo like this just posted so u inspired this "Sweetheart" with your lovely words .. but u always do luv.. J.G. in blanket mode.. on beach with Venus.. she is so adorable... luv.. forever..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 13, 2011 at 11:26 AM just luv the clandestine atmosphere of this piece and the two forms work very well together Michael luv... we all seem to have those secret coves where true words can exit onto pages expressing inner feelings .. excellent my White Knight as your Jersey Girl prepares to lie in the Sun one more day.. with luv forever and always...

Judy Ball August 13, 2011 at 11:23 AM Very nicely done indeed. A bit mysterious. God Bless, JB

Carrie Richards August 13, 2011 at 11:07 AM Clever, and rather haunting!! Nice one!!