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Written for 2026-01-15 Write A Beautiful Rubaiyat Poem Poetry Contest, sponsored by Constance La France
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Dark night of the soul

”simply choosing to stop thinking
we attain peace that’s unblinking”
            ~ quote by poet


Though we have been, seen and so known,
light of Self beyond time full blown,
assimilation yet awaits,
as we walk on this path alone.

Engaging in senseless debates,
our wayward ego celebrates,
having shrouded our inner light,
distancing us from heaven’s gates.

Mind thought to be boon, is now blight,
doubts arise and we crouch in fright,
lost in dreams we have created,
where imagination takes flight.

Feeling from God separated,
by day and night agitated,
knowing not silence is the way,
God in heart is not located.
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La France Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 7:31 PM
Seeker, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest, Write a Beautiful Rubaiyat (My Version). I like your quote, Constance
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 8:38 PM
Thanks for hosting, Constance dear and for the recognition
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 4:26 AM
Creative winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 8:28 AM
Thank you, Sara. I was not aware this poem had qualified.
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