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Dark Moon Night

on dark moon night

    lone wolf trots to his den ---

       mockingbirds sing


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          by: nette onclaud

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Painted Hunter

Date: 3/1/2013 10:49:00 AM

I came to read your first post on the soup. Wondeful. I hope you are doing well...everyone here misses you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2012 12:32:00 PM

Now that you don't have to stick to Chas's syllable count [on a dark moon night/ a lone lone trots to his den -- mockingbird sings] flows much better! Congrad's on your win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/12/2012 8:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this wonderful haiku, Nette! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Nette. Love,Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/11/2012 5:52:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your beautiful write...nice haiku..kudos to you,Friend...

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2012 12:32:00 PM

Hoorray Nette on another top 10 win.Loved it first time around.Oh...yes...you forgot to fav my haiku:(

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/11/2012 12:14:00 PM

Congrats on your wonderful win, Nette, with this magical night displayed! Blessings, Rhonda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/11/2012 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations nette a lovely piece xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2012 12:54:00 AM

congrats Nette luv on a super third place win for perfection of words luv..

Cindy Lu

Date: 3/5/2012 9:36:00 AM

shortly profound in this form :) God Bless, Cindy Lu

M.I.A .

Date: 3/2/2012 6:36:00 PM

wow! Lost wolf... pretty powerful there nette

Aida Melesse

Date: 3/2/2012 9:36:00 AM

It is amazing how few words tell a whole story in this remarkable write. Thanks!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2012 7:38:00 PM

nette, I think mine has a seasonal reference, but i don't think he says we have to reference it?? STill need to check that out!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2012 6:05:00 PM

A great picture created here, Nette. WEre we supposed to tell what our seasonal word was?? Oh, crap, did I forget something else for that strict contest? hahaha. I better go read his rules yet again. Luv, Andrea (what did you mean by aki no tsuki??)

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/1/2012 2:48:00 PM

What a fantastic write my friend! This might be for a contest if I remember correctly, if so this is a perfect poem for this particular contest! If it's not it's still a fabulous perfect poem! I really enjoyed this write this wonderful evening Nette! I just love how the wolf has her maternal instincts at full force, "howling for pups"! I love your poem! Great Work!!

Broken Butterfly

Date: 3/1/2012 1:53:00 PM

This is so visual nette, you sure painted a sad picture. Best of luck with this poem. Thanks for my placement in your Moods contest.

Don Johnson

Date: 3/1/2012 1:52:00 PM

yes i can see it vividly too...well done babe... we are to blame for what we do, and suffer consequences too :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2012 1:41:00 PM

Great one ..My thoughts went along this line last night only with the Coyote..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Karter is growing(from five pounds at birth to nineteen now), playing, sleeping..He is having a little congestion like from allergy..It is beginning to get more and more pollen in the air here..Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2012 1:38:00 PM

soupmails!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2012 1:35:00 PM

Good one Nette!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2012 1:33:00 PM

Yes!!!