Dark Love Revival

Hate, depression, and sorrow
wrap me in a shroud of darkness
suffocating me, making me feel empty
it hurts not knowing happiness
yet there is light, hope to help me through
why is this little light
this tiny bit of warmth
in all this cold 
how does it survive
why does it stay
is it trying to help
is it love, is that why it's warm
is it hope
is that why it's bright
or is it a person
I love in a manifestation of light
It's the girl I love and always will
MY LOVE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/19/2012 11:11:00 AM
i like the the title and your avatar ilove manga and anime you wrote a very good poem here dark expressive ilike it you should read my writing
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Date: 3/3/2011 8:59:00 PM
gees! nice ,, deep way of expressing emotions,..p.d.
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:57:00 AM
That manifestation of light is just what you need seemingly...Glad that I chose this one today to read...Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more excellent post.Thanks for stopping by to review my work..Sara
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