Dark Haikus and Tenkus

a heavenly voice 
whispers from within my wrist
I carve to hear it

unfathomable
she has chosen to be mine
out of our passion
a child is created
my son is born dead

the portrait of love
has become a charred picture
the colors have dimmed

as her life withers
my agony flourishes
my black heart decays

the angel of death
has come to take me away
two destinations
to which one shall I be sent
I fear the outcome

when she shows her face
angels hang their heads in shame
men fall to their knees
ethereal loveliness
she'll never want me

I purchase a gun
then take it back to my home
and load one bullet

why won't she depart
she exists in the blackness
when I close my eyes

when it rains fire
Christian priests take shahada
belief is fragile

I weep from her death
too beautiful for this world
even for Heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/5/2010 7:31:00 PM
I enjoyed the haikus
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Date: 5/5/2010 2:26:00 PM
Powerful poem. The emotion grips the reader. One can feel the sadness and despiration that comes from losing a child. Heartfelt piece. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 5/5/2010 1:43:00 PM
I feel some very deep saddeness in this one..I hope that it is just a write on a topic about the unhappy things that happen in life and not your life..Keep the creative pen flowing for if it is life writing about it will help deal with the situation...Sara
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:19:00 PM
sorry this form of dark haiku, where really awesome by the way. you styled them pretty good,..p.d.
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:18:00 PM
well done, enjoyed the read, have your self a good one,..p.d.
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