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I was down deep in a dark dreamy dream, wandering a wispy, winding wilderness, where sounds stabbed at an eerie secret silence; with roars, rumbles and the rage of riotous birds, in trees unseen and in branches of twisted tapestry. When I heard with heartbreak mother's heavenly voice, calling in the caliginous, obscure gloomy forest canopy; it was my name and I searched with a narcotic need, I ran wild, rampant and rapacious wailing WAIT. Until, I was worn-out weary and woebegone; I murmured and mumbled- mother, mother . . . Then, sun blazed like a bath into my bedroom. ____________________________ March 23, 2018 Poetry/Allitertion/Dark Dreamy Dreams Copyright Protected, ID 03-1484-459-23 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Alliteration Poem, sponsor, Silent One, Judged 03/2018 Second Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1052) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/16/2022 First Place

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Date: 9/3/2022 1:01:00 AM
Gorgeous! "I ran wild, rampant and rapacious wailing WAIT. Until, I was worn-out weary and woebegone;" - beautifully done. Soup mail.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/4/2022 4:52:00 PM
Caren, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, God Bless ~
Date: 9/1/2022 3:28:00 AM
love your alliteration Constance, don't like those dark dreams they sometimes occur and you wonder how they got there. Thank you for posting and god bless you...
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Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:08:00 AM
Michel, thank you so much for thecomment, I don't know where the nightmares come from either ~
Date: 8/31/2022 1:07:00 PM
Superb alliteration that uses unique, pleasing words like gumdrops to a child. Such a psychologically compelling piece too. Congratulations on a very fine posting! Sincerest regards, Brian
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Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:09:00 AM
Brian, thank you so much for the compliment and for the encouragement ~

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