Dark Dodoitsu

branches gripping to ice-wind
ground, a white-hue of regret
standing lonesome, falling down
losing everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Sarah. Love, Carol
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September 22, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Congrats Sarah on a fantastic first place win luv..
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September 22, 2011 at 4:30 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Sarah
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